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Stolen Love
Contributed by
lil_one
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:14:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's easier to think your gone
rather thatn up and left
i'll say you were stolen from me,
some pre- meditated theft.
i'll pretend im a mouring love
instead of another broken heart,
spill my soul out for you, with my words
like its some kind of art.
i'll only remember the good times,
imagine i didn't give you all that neglect,
maybe i'll get so good at deceiving me,
the pain will just deject.
you probably want me to fix this again,
as i've done before,
ripped out my heart has been
tears of pain are left in its core.
i'll never blame you for any of this
innocent is all you can be.
i still love you forever
look like no on can love me.
i know nothing of the future
or when we'll feel a change.
just know im fighting still,
scream and i won't be out of range.
tell me it'll be okay
tell me that you carre
tell me that you still need me
to always be there.
because i'll still be here, you now this
not much you or i can do,
just know i'll be here,
and i've always needed you
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lil_one
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2004-04-07 20:14:08]
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Re: Stolen Love
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by williamdye on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:20:47 PM AEST
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| A beautifull written poem. |
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Re: Stolen Love
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:52:58 PM AEST
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Other than cleaning up the spelling, you've got quite a nice write here. A trap we often fall into after a breakup. You've described it to a tee.
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