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Crestfallen
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:54:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Cracked life,
it's hard to hide
And it's also hard to show
There's no one I want to know
About all my strife
And my cracked life
Everyday,
I wonder if I'll see your face
And if we will come around
'Cause it feels like we're falling down
And the pain of this collision,
is offspring of my indecision
Cracked life,
it's hard not to lie
And say it's all okay
Hoping for it to go away
It's not alright,
my cracked life
Crestfallen,
and lately I've been clawin'
Searching for a state of mind,
that can make me feel alright in time
And the pain of our collision,
is offspring of my indecision
Cracked life,
it's hard not to cry
Happiness is only fantasy,
it's only make believe
I try to stay alive,
with my cracked life
And it's my indecision,
that made this great collision...
My indecision, my indecision
Copyright ©
ThePumpkinKing
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2004-04-07 18:54:58]
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Re: Crestfallen
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:11:43 PM AEST
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For someone trying to crawl back out from Writers Block this is fantastic. I have to say that I loved it!
"And it's my indecision,
that made this great collision..." I love how the whole poem is worded but those lines stuck with me
Great Work
Love 'n Hugs
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Re: Crestfallen
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:03:51 PM AEST
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There are many people who have had cracked childhoods and cracked lives. It takes a strong inner person to show it in an honest light and not hide behind a wall of illusion.
We all have cracks inside us, in our lives the key is to keep trudging onward. Never give up.
I wish you great happiness.
Kie |
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