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Never
Contributed by
Thumper0719
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:26:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Never is all I have to say. Never ever in my life will I follow you into the dark ice. The ice of trouble, the ice of faith. The darkness taking over. Taking over me. No more will I follow you into the dark. So leave me now. Go away. I've had enough of you. Step back. Get away. Just leave me be. Can't you see it's taking over me. Let me go, leave me be. I won't step into the ice never, never. Go.....Just please go away. I never want to see your face again. I don't want to see you smile at me in the dark. I've had enough just go away and leave me be. The pains to much just get away. There's nothing you can do to change my mind. Go away please, just let me go. Stop taking over me!!! Let go, before I freeze. I won't step into the ice! No never in my life! Stop taking over me......before I freeze.....
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Re: Never
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:46:45 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading it as well.
It doesn't have to rhyme to be poetry.
Just keep writing and i'll keep reading...
:O) Kie |
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Re: Never
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:18:01 PM AEST
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| i like this. poetry doesnt have to rhyme, some of the best poems dont. :) i really like this, and i would onsider it dark poetry. great write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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