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Even Here
Contributed by
ItsRayningTonite
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:08:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Take me away from this ocean of sorrow
This deep agony is drowning me
I'm no longer a part of anything
I'm simply alone
Nobody cares about my nights of endless tears,
Or the aguish that destroys me from within
To you I am no more than a shadow
And nobody will ever care
If I'm alive or dead
Why not bury myself Deep Within the earth
Make purpose of my body
Nothing good can come of it
With my soul still inside
Take me away from this place, this life
Kill me now, I can't continue with this pain
Im dying slowly...Just end it now
But of course you won't
Because even to kill me
Would take someone's knowledge
That I'm even here.
Copyright ©
ItsRayningTonite
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2004-04-07 18:08:45]
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Re: Even Here
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:41:47 PM AEST
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Your pen name caught my attention so I decided to give this a read. I'm more than glad I did. This is the heart on a page and it gave me chills.
"Because even to kill me
Would take someone's knowledge
That I'm even here."
Outstanding
Larry
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Re: Even Here
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:48:05 PM AEST
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very emotional and a very deep poem, i can understand what ur going through..
Well written
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