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How can you make me feel like this?
Contributed by
Wolfareen
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:23:55 PM in AEST
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How can you make me feel like this?
Like my whole body, my whole soul, my whole WORLD is screaming.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I want to fall to the floor and die laughing.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like black is not dark enough and blood is the only thing that's red.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I want to tear your eyes out but kiss you while I'm doing it.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like YOU'RE the only thing that matters.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I'd see you dead but then I'd want to die with you.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I want to EXPLODE!
How can you make me feel like this?
How DARE you make me feel like this?
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Wolfareen
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2004-04-07 17:23:55]
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Re: How can you make me feel like this?
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:51:08 PM AEST
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Yep... a rollercoaster indeed.
Well done, I enjoyed the ride. |
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Re: How can you make me feel like this?
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:51:44 PM AEST
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have had that sort of relationship long ago...ran far far away from it
you have describe so many bad relationships and the pain involved
Shari |
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Re: How can you make me feel like this?
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:28:12 PM AEST
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This Poem Brung Back Alot Of Bad Memories
In My Past Relationships.... So Much Pain Involved In This Write....
Good Write Though......
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: How can you make me feel like this?
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:21:43 PM AEST
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| reminds me of a previous relationship that i am now glad to be out of... very confusing, and very true, good write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: How can you make me feel like this?
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:26:55 AM AEST
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Yep- in total agreement. He makes me feel this way too (a joke, a joke- I couldn't resist).
Okay, seriously, a raw and completely identifiable diatribe against the hold that certain very attractive people seem to have over us.Why do we keep re-visiting this emotional hell? because it is such a delicious blend of feelings that make you feel so alive, so intense, as your poem so forcefully details.
Not that I've visited this place recently, but thanks for reminding me ......
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