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Bared Souls

Contributed by sunraybutterfly on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:46:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

The darkness surrounds her and engulfs her leaving her there alone confused – the pain that dwells deep in the heart can not be cured and memory not forgotten. A face so beautiful that only god himself could abandon.

She can feel the searing heat of the passion that once was the touch the sensation that once was so much a part of her that it took a bloody massacre to rip it from her being.

A war like no other a battle field that will always be scared, so many moons have passed and so many tides have risen and fallen.

This little being has grown – she has left her cocoon of darkness and the light is blinding her eyes have not felt this joy for so long.

Let go little one let the darkness that was concealing your pain, your passion, your soul lift. Rise to the new time – rise and feel a new sense

She was once a boys dream this pathetic being – she was a goddess and she had so many worshippers tied to her. She was in all their hearts

She was lost for them – she dived into the unknown and loved all of the new things that this world offered her – the banquets for flesh and sky with no limits the rush that was so unbelievable that glowed in all their eyes.

She tried their dreams their desires they were for her as she was for them – She would dance with sexual demons while they would watch – engulfing her – tasting her – she was the queen of the castle.

Can she sleep inside your mind – feel your dreams – taste your lips – your skin so soft? Your eyes so deep – can we walk through the valley – when we were so much younger when you held her hand – her body

Lover lay beside her – could you love her then – could it have been that two such beautiful creatures missed dimensions

Copyright Â© sunraybutterfly ... [ 2004-04-07 16:46:13]
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Re: Bared Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:07:51 PM AEST
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this was an excellent write. Great style. Welcome to YPDC.

Lindsey

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