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Away to the Never Ending
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YPDC_group_writes
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:42:32 PM in AEST
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Built up one word at a time. Writers in order of appearance.
Away to the Never Ending
Jellybellyprincess, Daniela_Maria_Violin, ShadowDaughter, Jackee_line, Soulless, MoonlitAngel, Happiness, arden, Avarice_Riot, blueheart, Putteragain, and venkat
Dancing silently under the silky,
velvety canopy bed sheets.
I'm tripping among roses,
being careful not to crush
your spirit's evanescent quality.
We've done away with negativity,
though sometimes we feel that
it never truly goes away.
Come with me to utopia,
in search of magical life
where paths lead to hidden,
secluded mystery where we are
dreaming of wild fantasies of
subconscious mind and
where past meets
they present themselves
in more colourful tones
swirling like prisms
Reflecting sensations untold.
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Re: Away to the Never Ending
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:32:06 PM AEST
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Well done to all of you!!! What a clever way to write such a beautiful poem, think I'll have a go at the next one, feeling brave lol.
Ali xx |
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Re: Away to the Never Ending
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:08:46 PM AEST
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An enthralling look into the aspirations of a poetic collective.
"where past meets
they present themselves
in more colourful tones
swirling like prisms"
This is quite exceptional, considering how difficult I think it must be to keep a thread alive.
Well done, the lot of you. |
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Re: Away to the Never Ending
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:19:18 PM AEST
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Outstanding work!! ( tips hat and bows to the wealth of talent at this site)
Very well done,
Roses and drinks all around barkeep
Larry |
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Re: Away to the Never Ending
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:03:18 PM AEST
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Nice group effort. Bravo carry on .
Whisper |
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Re: Away to the Never Ending
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:07:16 AM AEST
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Aaah..now I found this..it is o.k very cool and beatiful.
venkat |
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Re: Away to the Never Ending
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:08:57 AM AEST
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Aaah..now I found this..it is o.k very cool and beatiful.
venkat |
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Re: Away to the Never Ending
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:08:57 AM AEST
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Aaah..now I found this..it is o.k very cool and beatiful.
venkat |
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