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Why Did You Start?
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:36:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You make me mad!
because i can't, find the answers!
i feel so small,
you're an intruding b*****d!
you numb me down,
because i can't cope!
you're taking, you're advantage!
draining my hope!
you keep on itching,
even though you've reached, you're goal.
you just play rounds with my mind,
until i loose control!
then out shoots my anger,
in a sharp flow,
pulling away more happiness,
letting my dark-side show!
life is bitter,
it was obvisous, things would collide!
and now i feel so rotten,
all i want to do now is DIE!
only, i know i won't.
because no one wants to hear of another death!
and my grave will just be gobbed on!
and i only half, want to give in yet...
I DON'T WANT TO DIE,
but i'm still sore.
life really sucks,
it's so immature!
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deathdrop
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2004-04-07 16:36:31]
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Re: Why Did You Start?
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by Justalady on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:20:22 PM AEST
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| Anger give way to exceptance in time. Writing helps cool the mind. There will always be another time and perhaps better than before. Hang in. Written straight from the heart. Justalady |
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Re: Why Did You Start?
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:33:28 AM AEST
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Lot Of Anger In This Write....It Is Best If You Let It Out......Good Write....
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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