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life silently passing by
Contributed by
SAT
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:16:28 PM in AEST
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sitting beside me
i dont know what to say
why cant he realize
how much i want him today
he wont ever know
how i feel inside
by the rules of my feelings
i must abide
is he that blind
that he cant see my love
i cant set him free
like i could a dove
if only he could know
with out me to tell
we would live our lives
prosperous and well
with each other's love
to lift us up high
dont need to waste time
trying to get by
we will watch as our lives
pass quickly and silently by
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SAT
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2004-04-07 15:16:28]
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Re: life silently passing by
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:02:21 PM AEST
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| Well done, i enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: life silently passing by
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:41:23 PM AEST
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by the rules of my feelings
i must abide
mmm! i think you should scrap your ruiles and tell him how much you need him or as in you words life passes silently by! good write.
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Re: life silently passing by
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:06:50 PM AEST
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GOOD ONE GIRL! I THINK HE KNOWS IT'S JUST THAT HE'S AFRAID TO GIVE IN-MAYBE THE BEST FRIEND PART IS STOPPING HIM!!
EITHER WAY HE'S A LUCKY GUY!!! NICE POEM & MAKES A GREAT SHOT AT GETTING YOUR POINT THRU!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!!
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