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Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:23:03 PM in AEST
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Its all elementary,
This facade of a life,
This attachment to conformity,
Attachment of a knife,
To be honest I just dont understand,
To be honest I'm not being honest,
Understand whats in my hand
I sit alone in my room
Cloud of depression surrounds,
A knife rests in my tombe,
Reality cannot be found
I dream of people touching me,
Invading my space,
Just like before I see,
That faded evil face
Why did I let it happen,
Why did I let it go,
It all happened so sudden,
But I ask my self; so?
It cuts me up deep inside,
Everything all at once,
Poverty not far from sight,
Death of one I loved still fresh
I see my ugly face,
Stare back at me,
Cant get rid of the taste,
So blind I cant see
I stare at the knife,
So brilliant in light,
Ready to take my life,
Ready to rekindle my sight
Fed up of this reality,
Hoping for it to make sense,
Hoping for insanity,
In all this twisted mess
I pick it up and hold in my hand,
Only then can I see,
Only then can I understand,
I know what I be
WHY DID YOU TAKE HIM AWAY FROM ME
WHY DID YOU TAKE IT AWAY FROM ME
WHY DID YOU HURT ME
WHY DID YOU kill me
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2004-04-07 14:23:03]
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Re: Me
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:08:59 PM AEST
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That was very good Alec. This poem has so much hurt, but was so beautifully written. Wow
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Re: Me
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:05:17 AM AEST
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| Honestly, that was ****ing awesome. So much pain and anger there, although there are lots of quotable phrases here I liked and can relate to the last verse best. Peace and take care. |
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Re: Me
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:46:39 AM AEST
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i cant feel ur pain, welldone and dont stop writing
woei queen |
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Re: Me
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:17:14 AM AEST
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| i don't know what to say. i'm completely speechless! this was fantastic, i understand completely where you are comming from. though i've never fallen as far as you are. but for me right now. the only thing that keeps me going are my poems. i just hope that they do the same for you! |
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