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The Face in the Mist
Contributed by
ginsdance
on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 02:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I see his face, deep within my dream like state.
I reach for him, but in the distance, his face blurs,
And then, disappears.
I take chase, but no matter how far,
Or how fast, I run,
It doesn't make a difference,
He has disappeared.
The features that I knew by heart
Suddenly blend together
And take on a new shape.
The smoke that carries the briefest image
Is suddenly blown away,
And then, I see nothing.
Waking I look around me,
And feel uncharacteristically lonely
Because I have met my soul mate
Only to have him torn from me
In the most peculiar way.
It is hard to remind myself
That I have yet to meet him,
Instead I am looking into the recesses of my mind,
Grasping for anything that would, pray tell,
Give me one feature to look for,
One chism of his personality,
But I find it not.
Desperately I toss and turn
In the predawn
Trying to get back asleep,
Only to be sucked into the dream once again,
And again, I see his face,
And again, I walk towards him,
And again, he is torn away.
The only thing that I can do now is hope,
That what my mind knows is true,
Even though without you I wake up,
One day I will find you.
And then, I won't be troubled by the dream anymore,
Because when I wake up, you will be beside me.
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Re: The Face in the Mist
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by MisterRight on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 03:44:53 PM AEST
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Hey Gin, Great write... again. You may not be able to remember him from the dream, but you'll know him when you find him. Sounds like you're doing a little better.
Keep writing... I'll keep reading :)
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Re: The Face in the Mist
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by Chicken on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 01:11:45 PM AEST
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| One day you will find him.....and he will be your world. Just remember that. |
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Re: The Face in the Mist
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by Chicken on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 01:12:25 PM AEST
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| excellent write, by the way..... |
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