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Transcend
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:49:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I guess I'm stuck in a dream,
surrounded by rotting skin
On the ground
As I start to leave,
I cant ignore a gun
In my hand
I put it to my head,
Running images fly by
Of a life so fake
As I squeeze to control,
I remember the travesty
Of my material life
The bullet passes through my head,
And a joyful tear falls from my eye
As I trancsend
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
... [
2004-04-07 13:49:21]
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Re: Transcend
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:56:16 PM AEST
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A very strong outpouring of anger, pain and agony of the soul.
Well done.
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Re: Transcend
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:14:01 PM AEST
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I agree with what Larry said.
You expressed your feelings very well in this poem..
Kie |
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Re: Transcend
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:56:19 AM AEST
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| I respect that you don't want any pity or any special attention, and that you've vented your feelings in this truly expressive write. I hope your trancsension (uh, is that a word) works well with you. |
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Re: Transcend
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:21:16 AM AEST
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| it's deeply destroyed. that's all i'll say! |
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