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dead in this bed
Contributed by
angrycheerios
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:31:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wait anxiously for this bed to warm
as I wait and anticipate the looming void of sleep
this bed once offered comfort
but now is a meaningless way to pass some time
in this bed I'm lifeless
not resting
and uncomfortable with my toleration of it
I'll sleep in perfect vacancy
no dreams
no feelings
just dead
and I will wake
only to long again
for the death that awaits me tonight
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2004-04-07 13:31:46]
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Re: dead in this bed
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:55:04 PM AEST
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| you have an intresting style of writing, I like you anologies, they intreque me |
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Re: dead in this bed
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by morelikelyrics on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:57:37 PM AEST
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I wonder why you have submitted this poem under 'Life Poetry' while it seems to signify the very opposite... interesting...
Very eye-opening, and stirring
Nice write!!
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Re: dead in this bed
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:09:36 PM AEST
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| Interesing... I liked the analogies as well though I didn't understand them. |
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Re: dead in this bed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:11:41 PM AEST
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deep meaningful stuff well done.
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