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Facial Disguises
Contributed by
morelikelyrics
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 12:48:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Luminescent light peeks through my window blinds,
To arouse me from my esoteric reverie,
To originate new chances, and fresh opportunity,
But something within my ominous mind,
Still tells me that it's night.
Gelastic laughter resonates these amicable halls, such cachinnation,
To effectuate the facial expression,
The upward curving of the lips upon your face,
To generate the graceful imprression,
Of the forward humoring of temperamental tenants,
Living in this suppressive place.
But through these apocolyptic eyes,
I see past, beyond your deceptive disguise,
To the wincing of your internal affliction,
The pains way down in,
The very ones you hide...
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2004-04-07 12:48:27]
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Re: Facial Disguises
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by angrycheerios on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:34:11 PM AEST
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| this was really good...i like the "ominous mind" part for some reason..anyways..very nice :) |
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Re: Facial Disguises
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:05:25 PM AEST
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very interesting poem.. I enjoyed reading it.. it is so true that some hide their pain deep within.. great write
peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Facial Disguises
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:26:46 PM AEST
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Beuatiful, just beautiful. This was amazing. Written so well, with your unique style, a great poem through and through.
Lindsey |
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Re: Facial Disguises
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:50:57 AM AEST
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| ken this one...you are amazing. ive typed and erased about 12 things just now so ill leave it at that...bella |
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Re: Facial Disguises
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:50:57 AM AEST
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| ken this one...you are amazing. ive typed and erased about 12 things just now so ill leave it at that...bella |
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