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Blame
Contributed by
silent
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:34:57 AM in AEST
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I blame you dad for what you could not do
I blame you mum, for what you could not overcome
I blame you my sister, for the torture I made for myself
I blame you society for the pain I was, and still feel
Please release me, lay the blame somewhere, anywhere
While I think where to lay it, I will live it
Till death.
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Re: Blame
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by arden on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:42:04 AM AEST
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i like this. full of emotion. well done. keep it up you got a great talent.
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Re: Blame
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by fallensilence on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:47:34 AM AEST
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| its short but it gets your message across. very well written. -david |
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Re: Blame
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:49:01 AM AEST
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Yeah, part of finding that key is letting it go. I came to a point where I realized I had to forgive my parents for being who they are more than for anything they did or didn't do. I can feel this.
Stitch |
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Re: Blame
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:50:38 AM AEST
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| Well, I guess this shows we sometimes must assume the blame ourselves for our predicaments...right? |
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Re: Blame
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:15:40 PM AEST
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We all blame sometimes. The key to overcoming is to live life and find happiness that is the best revenge of all. Don't ever give up.
Enjoyed this poem, immensely... Kie |
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Re: Blame
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:07:50 PM AEST
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this is very well written you can feel the emotion in it.. soemtimes we look for anything to blame but its best to let it go or else you can't move on..
Peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Blame
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:36:19 PM AEST
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This is a VERY insightful write and I am quite
impressed with it.
Great work!
Roses
Larry
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Re: Blame
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:34:58 AM AEST
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Sad poem. It is not always easy to get even with what life gives us.
I really like this one.
Hur |
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Re: Blame
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:53:50 PM AEST
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So little written but so much said. This is sad, but it is fabulous. You write with a certain something I have yet to figure out. But it keeps me yearning for more.
Lindsey |
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Re: Blame
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:01:28 AM AEST
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The blame game? I have been there. Eventually it won't matter. I have finally forgiven my parents just for being who they are. Hard to work through but worth it. You have explained this with depth and feeling.
Stitch |
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