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Tanka II
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 02:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Tanka II
Fishing nets play out.
Casting from shore that's so close,
these men are skillful.
Plying a trade now known old,
Lanterns give light to stream cold.
Copyright ©
ramfire
... [
2002-09-24 14:15:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Tanka II
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 08:36:00 AM AEST (User
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Very nice , I like the way you write your poetry, its short but also right on target.
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