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Ruined By Love
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:18:33 AM in AEST
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Staple my heart back together
The gun it hurts my pale skin
Now a deep dark crimson hole
So painful my head shoots bacl to scream
My eyes fill and spray
So much water
There i stand in the rain
My arms hang lose
Help me please
Safety pin them back together
Like they were
Once my lovely pale white skin
Now damaged by love
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bleeding_chains
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2004-04-07 11:18:33]
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Re: Ruined By Love
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:22:19 AM AEST
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| oh wow...this is so incredible... |
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Re: Ruined By Love
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 12:48:35 PM AEST
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| wow, this is great, really descriptive and good. i love the first line. reminds me of things. another great write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Ruined By Love
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by angrycheerios on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:41:34 PM AEST
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| this is good. i like the imagery. |
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Re: Ruined By Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:13:32 PM AEST
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wow this is an awesome write!! we all can get damaged by loves pain at points in our life.. be strong and I hope you get through the pain
peace and hope
JENNA |
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