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Unuttered
Contributed by
reilt
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:50:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love fades.
I dream of retracting
All those empty words
To replace with truth
And the final admittance.
But you go
And you're gone
Without a hint of regret
Or sadness.
How little we loved
Or too much...?
When into the night it flies
And leaves my sorry flesh unwrapped,
My weeping heart unkept.
And all that's left
Are tired thoughts
Unuttered.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-07 07:50:55]
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Re: Unuttered
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by dAWn on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:24:11 AM AEST
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| short but it captures all that sadness perfectly. I like some of the -oposites-...like how little we loved or too much?... really...great! |
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Re: Unuttered
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:17:34 AM AEST
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So sad. But really really good.
Dizza |
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Re: Unuttered
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:32:06 AM AEST
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Ah that was beautiful although very sad and excellent choice of words esp here:
How little we loved
Or too much...?
When into the night it flies
And leaves my sorry flesh unwrapped,
My weeping heart unkept.
Once again, excellent write. |
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Re: Unuttered
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:32:41 AM AEST
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| yer yer good work i felt this, i realised in the end he didnt even love me at all when the whole time i was blind to see further than 3 steps infront of me. I was love struck. Good poem |
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