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untitled
Contributed by
reilt
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:33:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Tired.
So weary of this...
whatever this is.
Bound to it,
A dead weight of sadness,
A haunting loneliness
that resounds
and deafens by silence.
Caught between
a hide tide of tears
and a low ebb of sorrow.
Where do I find the strength
to struggle through
this maze,
the thick malaise of over-riding pain?
So lost,
My heart screams inside my heaving chest
to be healed.
Still...it goes unheard.
And I'm tired,
So weary of this,
That I ache to sleep and dream
Of happiness
Whatever that is...
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-07 07:33:50]
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Re: untitled
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:10:26 AM AEST
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| I know the feeling all too well. Sometimes it feels better to disconnect and drown in hope of finding peace, yeah? Great write, and I hope you find peace and happiness along the road. |
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:22:40 AM AEST
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Very good. Hope u get through this.
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Re: untitled
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by Queen_Dolly on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:40:44 AM AEST
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A beautiful rush of low emotions that you seem oh-so-tired of. Beautiful =)
I especially like the ending two lines:
Of happiness//Whatever that is...
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Re: untitled
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:15:47 AM AEST
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Very good writing is what it is.
One of these days u will look back from where u came in wonder.
You've captured these feelings well. I can certainly relate as I've been there before. MY load gets lighter each day.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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