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Shy of Love
Contributed by
reilt
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:34:02 AM in AEST
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It's too shy of love
To be real in the morning light.
And there's an unfulfilled desire to sense
His body wrapped in her sweet scent.
They create their own instead
With unspoken dreams
Of lovers who,
With the sunrise,
Knew how to kiss and tell.
It's too shy of love, my friend,
And too silent.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-07 06:34:02]
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Re: Shy of Love
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:30:32 AM AEST
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Nice.
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Re: Shy of Love
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:44:02 AM AEST
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I think this is such a romantic write, but just shy of conventional romance, you know? I mean, it's in the name, right? lol....
Well, you've got the feeling of the morning after, which in itself is supposed to be.... peaceful, sublime, surreal....
But some of the lines in there give such a feeling of "not quite". The kiss and tell line is my personal favorite (I love anything that takes a spin on a common phrase--- just one of those things lol)
I could sense the disquiet in it.
Very well written, I enjoyed this a lot =)
God bless,
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Re: Shy of Love
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by Merry on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:00:19 PM AEST
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very pretty write - with a touch of innocence about it - nice work
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Re: Shy of Love
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:12:10 AM AEST
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Awesome!
Luv your style.
luv, huggs,
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