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my only way
Contributed by
srugglingyoungster
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:55:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness turns to death.
Silence shattered by screams.
Sadness replaced by blood
and the body on the floor.
I cant remeber why I did this,
or why I even care.
All I remember is the feel
of pain, and the coldness
of the damp, empty floor.
The build ups caused so
much confusion,
amd it isnt exactly fair,
but who said it had to be.
For the last time though
did i feel such regret.
And for the last time do
I feel so hated.
Death was my only way
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srugglingyoungster
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2004-04-07 05:55:38]
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Re: my only way
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 08:32:39 AM AEST
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Re: my only way
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:40:42 AM AEST
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Powerful, really powerful. It is indeed very good.
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Re: my only way
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:42:24 PM AEST
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So much talk of getting out this way. What a thought provoking poem in everyway. I'm so glad you still around to write, so many are gone forever and a day!
Tomorrow always looks brighter...go to bed and have a good night's sleep.......more hope tomorrow you will reap.
Descriptive......beyond belief!
Dark Poetry is not my "cup of tea" but this one done well.........so that Icould feel and see!
Good job.
consue
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