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While You Were Sleeping
Contributed by
teejay
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:25:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sometimes when you're sleeping
I'll watch you as you're dreaming
wondering where your dreams take you
hoping you're having beautiful dreams
And I gently brush your brow
wondering if you could possibly fathom
the depth of my love
that measures beyond mere words
Never in my wildest dreams
had I imagined that I would be
in the arms of such a loving soul
that completes me
In your peacefully sound sleep
I gently kiss your beautiful warm lips
trying not to disturb
your dream world
And silently thank heaven above
for giving me such a love
that not only fulfills me
but makes me the woman I want to be ...
Copyright ©
teejay
... [
2004-04-07 03:25:40]
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Re: While You Were Sleeping
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:53:12 AM AEST
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Very good poem. Seems like u really like dis guy.... Hope it stays the way it is.
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Re: While You Were Sleeping
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by reilt on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:45:17 AM AEST
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| i can totally relate...feel exactly the same about someone...it's a great feeling |
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Re: While You Were Sleeping
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:13:51 PM AEST
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Oh My Tee Jay...........this was exquisite.......how delightfully romantic can you get.........you have so much love in heart....and it beams through in your poems in every part!
You are truly talented, dear Tiana......and I'm so glad we meet........Welcome to YPDC....you'll be loved her alot right from the very start! And you will always be very happy!
Your lover, husband whatever......one lucky man is he!
love
consue
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