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where were you?
Contributed by
Crash
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:00:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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He broke your heart
I was there
When you got hurt
I was there
When you cried
I was there
When you needed a ride
I was there
When you needed a shoulder
I was there
Whenever you were in need
I was there
But when I needed a friend
Where were you?
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2004-04-07 01:00:14]
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Re: where were you?
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:12:58 AM AEST
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| Well-written poem, I like how you addressed the situation directly and with frank questions. You described the feeling of a one-sided friendship really well too. |
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Re: where were you?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:59:03 AM AEST
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awesome write!! I definately can relate to this.. I felt the same at one point.. Some friends come and go and if they aren't there for you then they weren't a true friend to begin with..
peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: where were you?
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:38:21 AM AEST
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| short, but effective. it's reallly good! |
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Re: where were you?
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by zeppchic420 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 03:55:57 PM AEST
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oh, this one almost brought tears to my eyes. all too often do i feel the same way.
great write.
zeppchic
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