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Listen up!
Contributed by
thumper
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:43:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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I said, 'Yo! Peace out!'
But peoples don't seem to listen.
I said, 'Wazz up?'
And get no answer.
You ask me to stop it
And you seem to mean it.
But when I ignore you
It's a whole different story.
You should expect to be treated
The way you treat others.
But obviously you don't think
This goes for you.
So you'd better listen up
And get this clear
I'm not going to listen to you
Till you listen to me!
Copyright ©
thumper
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2004-04-06 20:43:48]
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Re: Listen up!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:07:26 AM AEST
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thats a talented youngster you've got there!
wow!
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Re: Listen up!
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by morelikelyrics on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:06:07 PM AEST
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a clever one as well...
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Re: Listen up!
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:50:00 AM AEST
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| Welldone..God bless Kandy, may she write more and more. venkat |
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Re: Listen up!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:02:11 PM AEST
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| A great poem for a nine year old! Encourage her to keep writing. I didn't get enough encouragment when I was her age. My mother just *assumed* I knew I was good. Cheers! |
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