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Lost innocence
Contributed by
ICEYFLAMES
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Excitement
What is it?
Emotion or thought...
Takes over your limbs
and your soul
Adrenaline rush,
all over your body.
Heat flashes,blushing,-
GOosebumps all over.
What is it?
Feeling or State of being.
Copyright ©
ICEYFLAMES
... [
2004-04-06 20:28:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lost innocence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shadow on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:36:11 PM AEST (User
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I understand the meaning. I like this poem. It would make a nice addition to a peotry book. But hey i don't make them. It was short yet sweet in the wording. Good job. |
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Re: Lost innocence
(User Rating: 1 ) by valek on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:18:47 PM AEST (User
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i feel it
i love it
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Re: Lost innocence
(User Rating: 1 ) by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:57:51 PM AEST (User
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mm beuitul in an erotic way. :) and i vote on it being all those things |
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