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Eliptical Spring
Contributed by
ICEYFLAMES
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:23:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Curseth the day,
The day death took spring
Today the birds don't chirp or sing
The day death took spring,
The flowers wilt and die;
The fish will boil, wash ashore,
The day that death took spring,
You took my heart, you watched it break,
I died inside
The that you took spring
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ICEYFLAMES
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2004-04-06 20:23:56]
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Re: Eliptical Spring
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by ICEYFLAMES on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:34:27 PM AEST
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| THis is poem is not about nature LMAO |
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Re: Eliptical Spring
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by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:56:30 PM AEST
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| good read, but that guy was right, not really about nature exactly. i like the way the feeling goes along in this, its really 'sharp' i guess is a good word for it. the words are clean and the world is well defined |
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