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The Light Through The Trees
Contributed by
jaeann
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:07:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The forest is where she comes from
her tree-lined retreat
a touch in the dark
a truth too stark
a silent scream
a crushed dream
her sanity beat
the forest is where she's from.
The forest is where it started
no where to run
a long road of pain
a moment's disdain
a simple trip
an innocence whipped
the forest is where it all started.
The forest is where she goes
when the walls close in
a rush too steep
a limit to keep
a laughing memory
a missing key
when she bears all sin
the forest is where she needs to go.
The forest her sanctuary
with all her little walls
that is where she ran from
that is from where she came undone
that is where she hides when they come
that is where she can only run
just as long as she doesn't fall
the forest is forever her bitter sanctuary.
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Re: The Light Through The Trees
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by Shadow on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:40:13 PM AEST
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| I love and hate poem. All at the same. The words where placed very well and i liked it. Images are screamed in this. Good job. ^_^ |
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Re: The Light Through The Trees
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by Shadow on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:40:46 PM AEST
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| a love and hate poem. All at the same. The words where placed very well and i liked it. Images are screamed in this. Good job. ^_^ |
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Re: The Light Through The Trees
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:43:47 PM AEST
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oh faith, your style, grace and flow are excellent, the poem magically enchantingly beautiful, your talent shines:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Light Through The Trees
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by scorpion on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:36:11 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. We all have a place in our lives that we must go to get away from the world. Keep up the great work. I enjoy your unique style, it sets you apart from everybody else. It is what makes you unique. And I love uniqueness. |
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Re: The Light Through The Trees
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:58:12 PM AEST
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I think we all need a sanctuary and what better retreat than a forest, i imagine all sorts of happy places when i'm stressed have to put this in my head with the rest of them good write.
wildejohnny. |
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