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~suicide note~

Contributed by booboo on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:49:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



one last time i say good-bye
this good-bye is not meaning i'll see ya
in a few,i'm gonna go and never come back
i hate everyone,i know thats not good

these thoughts running through my head
so fast nothing is coming in clear enough
for me to understand,this is real,i can see
you love me but i also see that you hate me

as i'm about to hit the ground i will see
your face,telling me to get up and i ****** up again
its too late we can't go back and erase
all the **** i got myself into,this is my suicide note

i just wanna die,i don't wanna be here next to you
i have to cope with all this terrible ****,i hate my f*cking
life,no one sees me but me,some days i don't want to

these all so similar days and nights will never go away
no matter how much i change i could never forget
the way i used to be,i was so crazy i was so stupid

taking my life would be selfish,but i'm sick and tired of
looking in this broken mirror at a heartless little girl
so many people tell me this and that,so many people
say its up to me.it seems like they could careless

as i'm about to hit the ground i will see
your face,telling me to get up and i ****** up again
its too late we can't go back and erase
all the **** i got myself into,this is my suicide note





Copyright © booboo ... [ 2004-04-06 19:49:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: ~suicide note~ (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:08:18 PM AEST
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This is a really really good poem, i know how you feel, this would be a great song!:)
Great Write!
*luved it a lot!!;)*
*XXoXXoXXo*


Re: ~suicide note~ (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:26:16 AM AEST
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welldone good poem, i know the feelings you have felt. Lucky for me i got through these, we all need to reach out and get help sometimes we shouldnt be scared to ask


Re: ~suicide note~ (User Rating: 1 )
by valek on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 12:17:01 PM AEST
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i know how you feel. you just put it into words better than most people. very nice write. i enjoyed it much.....


Re: ~suicide note~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 02:34:03 PM AEST
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this is good, this is really good.it gave me that aching pain in my chest when something is said and its scarey how much u can relate to it. thankyou for sharing it xxx


Re: ~suicide note~ (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:34:53 AM AEST
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i understand what you are feeling in this poem i think everyone has felt that way, and i hope you get past it, but to be perfectly honest i thought the poem could use a little work, i mean dont get me wrong the words are powerful but they just dont flow right it's like a jumble of emotions but they arent really conveying much together, reading them one by one i can understand what you felt but together they are just one big mess, i hope you dont take this too seriously,it's just constructive criticisim, better luck next time




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