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Falling Down

Contributed by booboo on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:45:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

theres alot of things i found on my own
and you're one of them,but i must say good-bye
i hate my life,theres nothing i can do now to save
myself its too late,i'm sorry

i'm not gonna die today,but i prey to god
that i will die tomorrow,say you love me,
but thats still not enough to help me realize

falling down into this empty whole
in this cold ground,i can't see nothing but the blue sky
trust me,you're better off without me,i'm
nothing but nothing,falling down,falling down,falling down

we both want to start over,but theres
no way,its been going on for too long
this mess could never be cleaned

i'm going to die,maybe today,even though
i'd rather it be tomorrow,so i can atleast
say good-bye and kiss my ass,i don't
want anybodys sympathy,i'm glad you don't want mine

i not only hate you,i hate my father
how could he have kids hes not even
a man,god i don't understand,hes to blame
he mad my life living hell,now i'm a hell raiser

falling down into this empty whole
in this cold ground,i can't see nothing but the blue sky
trust me,you're better off without me,i'm
nothing but nothing,falling down,falling down,falling down

Copyright © booboo ... [ 2004-04-06 19:45:02]
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Re: Falling Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 03:32:30 PM AEST
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good write i feel ya on this one

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