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I Remember...
Contributed by
BrookyBabi
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:30:53 PM in AEST
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I remember a long, long time ago, I used to have the best friend I could ever imagine*I remember us always being together and never being apart*I remember we used to have our little pow-wows but always making up after five minutes*I remember bickering over boys and who goes first*I remember staying up until four o’clock in the morning on the phone having our little late night talks*I remember building our little tree house out in the back of the woods*I remember us always staying the night at each other’s houses and getting in trouble for laughing so hard*And I remember you saving my life from the car that almost hit me*I also remember the look on your face when you said, “I’m so sorry Brooke...but I’m moving”*I remember me crying all during that night and not being able to go to sleep*I remember myself thinking “I’ll never see her again” *I remember thinking about how lonely I’m going to feel after losing my best friend*I remember the day you moved and let me tell you...I will NEVER forget*I remember you waving to me out of your car window*I remember both of us having streams of tears flowing down from our eyes*And I’ll always remember that little saying that you told me about how we’ll be best friends forever.....
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Re: I Remember...
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by Soulless on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:43:54 PM AEST
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O that reminds me of good times with my friend, great poem. Very unique style you got. I cant wait to read more,
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: I Remember...
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:44:36 PM AEST
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| Great poem, Brooke. You know, I have a best friend like that whose name is Brooke. What a coincindence (however you spell that.). You did a good job of describing how close you two were and I'm sure a lot of people can relate to something like that. Take Care! |
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Re: I Remember...
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by BrookyBabi on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:49:27 PM AEST
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| Thanks so much guys...I'm not much of a writer. But when I juss have the feeling that I WANNA write, I juss go for it. And I am really proud of my writing! :) HeHe...thanks again! |
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