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Satin Clovers
Contributed by
ConfusedPancake
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:06:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Professor kill-pain riding into town again
Riding through the halls
Down inside your mind
Did you really think he'd leave
Did you think he'd go away so soon
I know you need more
in more than one way just to keep your cool
Goodnight to the clovers
The black satin leaves of forever
Goodbye to the lovers
Those shadows in the covers of forever
They disappear and fade
They disappear and fade away
Professor relief riding through your heart
You can't bare to part with his pain
You can't bare to part with him again
He serves you adventures on platters of gold
As you write in your journal and speak in jokes
Goodnight to the clovers
The black satin leaves of forever
Goodbye to the lovers
Those shadows in the covers of forever
They disappear and fade
They disappear and fade away
You always wish for something better
While your life drips away like the coffee you serve
You always wish for more
Can't feel anything without any worth
You can't feel anything anymore
You can't feel anything at all
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ConfusedPancake
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2004-04-06 18:06:01]
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Re: Satin Clovers
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:50:50 PM AEST
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"You always wish for something better
While your life drips away like the coffee you serve"
This was so powerful when I read it.
Well done... Kie |
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Re: Satin Clovers
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by Soulless on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:16:22 PM AEST
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Wonderful write. I especially the verses,
"Goodnight to the clovers
The black satin leaves of forever
Goodbye to the lovers
Those shadows in the covers of foreverecially loved the verse "
IT really caught my attention. I also enjoyed the powerful words you weaved into it. Absolutely breathdtaking!
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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