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nuclear family
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:39:38 PM in AEST
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The Nuclear Family makes me sick
with their Annual Holiday
The Nuclear Family makes me sick
'cause I can't have life their way
The Nuclear Family makes me sick
'cause they don't know how lucky they are
The Nuclear Family makes me sick
'cause sometimes they just seem so far...
The Nuclear Family makes me sick
when they're always there in your face
The Nuclear Family makes me sick
with all in its perfect place
The Nuclear Family makes me sick
'cause of how their life is so clean
The Nuclear Family makes me sick
'cause its been so long since that life I've seen.
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Re: nuclear family
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by LouisaMontagu on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:57:21 PM AEST
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hmm Different..
Very Good
Louisa x |
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Re: nuclear family
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:59:05 PM AEST
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| It is different and gives the image of being outside and looking in with reoccuring jealousy. Even those families that seem to have it all, they too have problems. I really liked this and thought it unique...Kie |
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Re: nuclear family
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by jade_elephant on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:55:41 PM AEST
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| i love how they are a perfect nuclear family. such a contradiction, nuclear being so harmful and polluting and destructive of all the wonderful natural things in life. so how can they be perfect? perhaps you are angry because they can be normal regardless of their imperfections? compared to yourself? 'so long since that life i've seen' meaning you are non-nuclear? im very confused by this, but im glad you're not like them, our disfigurements are the things that create us, and i wouldnt want you to be anything like an average person- you wouldnt be half as wonderful! and who needs family, when you have such great friends?! xxx |
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Re: nuclear family
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:58:02 AM AEST
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i understand this perfectly jellie. your anger is in the right place and conveyed to perfection. i didnt realise you felt this strongly about it, but if you were in a nuclear family would you have half the experiences to write about? your perfect in your own way and you should never compare your wonderful family to some stiff boring average family!!
love and hugs
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Re: nuclear family
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by Broken-glass on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:13:36 PM AEST
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| Can I just say... being in a 'Nuclear' family can be very frustrating and confusing at times! Then again, I guess me saying this is exactly where the idea of people not valuing their privileges spawned from! Amazing write from an amazing poet xxxx |
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Re: nuclear family
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:38:59 PM AEST
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I don't know what to make of this one, except that the shape of your block of prose looks uncannily like a mushroom cloud . . . by jingo.
Interesting read. |
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