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Withdrawl
Contributed by
MorbidMongrel
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:31:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Twisting, turning, pounding
Purpose without
Losing myself...slowly
My hands are so far away
So distant
Similar to my lost self
Ears ringing
A tone too familiar
Echoes of a pain not yet forgotten
My mind is searching, searching, searching
Thoughts racing...
Sanity is temporarily elusive
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2004-04-06 16:31:04]
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Re: Withdrawl
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:54:55 PM AEST
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eegad, this sounds very very familiar... and yet it's general as hell that i don't know what to think! great write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Withdrawl
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by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:24:18 AM AEST
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| Good write, it's not a very common way you would write a poem and i love that about things... change and difference. |
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