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Lost … and back again..?
Contributed by
Hurretje
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:25:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You… your mouth … your hands… your eyes…
You whisper… touch… warmth…stirring my senses… invading…
my mind exposed…vulnerability guarded…
You caress… touch… plough marks in my hair… entering…
my skin bare…nudity covered…
You see… touch… paradise… illuminating my core… besieging…
my soul set free…my essence sheltered…
Utopia
Eden
Heaven
Your arms
Cold
Impressions of another world…
Unfamiliar
Your stroking…
…murmuring…
…looks…
Received
Rage
Sorrow
Despair
Emptiness
Naked… defenseless… homeless…
SWEPT away!
Collapsed.
Diminished…
Picked up
You whisper…
You caress…
You see…
Copyright ©
Hurretje
... [
2004-04-06 16:25:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lost … and back again..?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:52:58 PM AEST (User
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ooo, this is awesome... lots of beautiful imagery!! great writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Lost … and back again..?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:19:13 PM AEST (User
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Different.... but I like that.
Nice job. |
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Re: Lost … and back again..?
(User Rating: 1 ) by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:18:42 PM AEST (User
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i like this a lot... different but terrific! I love the way you formatted it .... definatly adds character... nice work !! |
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Re: Lost … and back again..?
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:42:50 AM AEST (User
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This Is Very Good Writing Loved It..
Beautifully Done...Awesome Imagery...
Keep Em Coming :-)
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: Lost … and back again..?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:24:37 AM AEST (User
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WOW!!!! This was stunningly beautiful. I loved how you wrote it. *S* Cynthia |
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