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Land
Contributed by
Suz
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:17:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Blueprints left over from ageless stories
Strip searching characters from fairy land
Slicing open pink-flowered mattresses with a pea underneath
Love, sex, and rock-and-roll
Red and white socks like peppermint below my ankles in the forest
On a blue picnic blanket and I am so goddam happy
I think I see a folk-person shimmering with a fallen log
The air is warm like candy corn and I am so goddam happy.
Copyright ©
Suz
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2004-04-06 15:17:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Land
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:26:47 PM AEST (User
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In the beginning I was lost in the imagery. At the ending I was giggling because I thought the poem was so cute and funny.
I'm thinking zoloft is a good thing?
Thank you for sharing this with us....
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