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Love trial
Contributed by
gothicangel
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:10:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I gather myself and stand up for the trial.
Ridding myself of both hope and denial.
Cross-examinating the feelings inside me,
the love that I feel, how strong can it be?
That I love you is beyond any reasonable doubt,
but I still have to wonder what I'm thinking about.
I've felt the strongest emotion that I can recall,
but the time that I've known you is not long at all.
It may be a long time until we meet again.
When that day arrives, will I still feel this pain?
Can this be the punishment from above,
for the crime I've committed, for falling in love?
You are the judge and the jury of all.
I am at trial, standing there small,
awaiting to hear the sentence on me.
I cling to my lawyer, how harsh can it be?
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2004-04-06 13:10:16]
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Re: Love trial
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:14:18 PM AEST
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this is so well written very well done.
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Re: Love trial
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by arden on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:33:09 PM AEST
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i agree so well written and just amazing. love the flow very smooth. great work.
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Re: Love trial
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by tiny_mo on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:46:16 PM AEST
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| That was a splened poem. Truely inspiring and emotional. I love it. Good Job!!! |
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Re: Love trial
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by swiftsouljah on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:58:45 PM AEST
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vivid images i think i went to this same "court" it was a mistrial... it sucks... anyways great poem
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