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the forest of madness
Contributed by
gothicangel
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:52:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Whispering sounds, I walk in the forest
A black, heavy night, loathsome to be
Strange stars, and cosmic green atmosphere
I walk here alone, but with thousand eyes staring
A full moon sends white rays of blinding light
I hear chanters in the woods, unknown and unspoken
The black forest will swallow me, I am sure
As I walk a path which will lead me to madness
Tolerate the crawling, and faceless faiths
I walk among colorless trees and shapes
A reddish saviour, a fire which burns
But I am lost, I cannot reach the stars
Leave me now, I will bear my burden
In the woods of darkness I witness their dance
In compulsion, or delirium, I join them in chaos
A feast of the Great, a fiction of truth
Symbols are painted on the statue of Ithaqua
Blood is shed, as the stars bring their light
A sound is heard, and the rhytm grows slower
Two gleaming stars burning bright - Like eyes
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Re: the forest of madness
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by arden on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:35:55 PM AEST
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Ohhh great imagery and kinda creepy. This was awesome! Just so dark and good.
Well done.
Arden
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Re: the forest of madness
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:50:30 PM AEST
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| I got goose bumps and a chill. It is so creepy that its enticing to read on. I wouldn't want to read it at night! Excellent poem, truly... Kie |
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Re: the forest of madness
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by silent on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:32:15 AM AEST
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Gee thanks for that. I appreciate insomnia.
One of the best i have read of it's kind, still got the shakes, your writes frighten me a little, and that isn't easy to do.
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Re: the forest of madness
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:24:54 PM AEST
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| *does not plan to walk in the forest tonight* lol, excellently vivid image filled poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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