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Clouding my mind
Contributed by
ADreamWithinADream
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:47:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have waited so long for a feeling like this
That will encompass me completely
And cloud my mind in perfect bliss
And you came striding in so nobly
When I thought life was usless and felt so alone
I didn't live at all, I just drifted along each day
My hear had been broken and torn, but he was the one who had sewn
it back together, as he came my way
I will NEVER forget the day I fell in love with him
My heart, soul, and mind he did win
Even though he is only a friend
I shall crave for his love til the end
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ADreamWithinADream
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2004-04-06 12:47:51]
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Re: Clouding my mind
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by gothicangel on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:21:00 PM AEST
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| Oh, beautiful.. Love is great=) Good luck! Nice poem=)) |
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Re: Clouding my mind
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by arden on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:38:13 PM AEST
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i find this really sad.. and full of emotion. just a awesome write. so well written. love this.
Arden |
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Re: Clouding my mind
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by tiny_mo on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:04:44 PM AEST
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| Thing like that only happen once and the way you describe him is such a beutiful thing and I love it. |
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