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Unicorn Love
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:20:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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The unicorn stands on a hill
on a moonlit summer night,
the warm breeze blows
through its mane and tail.
The stars twinkle
in their most radiant light,
he waits for another of his kind
to come along and
stand beside him on the hill.
He bends his lengthy
muscular neck down to the ground
and picks a few blades of grass,
he stops and looks,
off in the distance
he sees another unicorn.
The moonlight glistens
on her shiny, white coat,
he slowly begins to
walk over to her.
She is a little timid
of him at first,
then their noses meet.
Their necks entwine
like a pair of lovers
entangled in a hug,
their hearts and souls become one.
They gallop to the
top of the hill and
stand together as one,
in the warm,
moonlit summer night.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.6/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-04-06 11:20:52]
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Re: Unicorn Love
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:23:58 AM AEST
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Simply enchanting!! :o)
Very well done
Roses
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Re: Unicorn Love
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:33:04 AM AEST
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magically delicious
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Re: Unicorn Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:23:19 PM AEST
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The necks entwined line sets the whole poem for me, sort of makes you feel good!
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Re: Unicorn Love
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:31:31 PM AEST
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| Unicorns eclipse what is magical and dwells in the lands of a fairies dreams. This was excellent! Kie |
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Re: Unicorn Love
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by arden on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:45:49 PM AEST
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Very enchanting and just lovely. I really like this one a lot.
Keep it up.
Arden
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Re: Unicorn Love
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by twinkletoes on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:06:15 PM AEST
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very pretty images...nice read.
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Re: Unicorn Love
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:07:35 AM AEST
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THAT WAS A CUTE POEM! PRETTY GOOD FOR COMING TO YOU & YOU WROTE IT!!
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Re: Unicorn Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:31:48 PM AEST
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ohhh very beautiful! cynthia, its so sweet you had two of them, ahh, i just love unicorn poetry:) hugs n' love nessa
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