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your warm
Contributed by
valek
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:17:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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please dont do this, this time
im falling into you again
i have so little, i need something more
falling back into all that killed me before
remembering your face helps me get by
yet everytime i see you i want to die
i would give up everything, i would conform
just for once to be inside your warm
let me live within your pulse
and sleep through flowing red
nothing is better than the taste of your breath
as i lay with you in bed
i want to cut my wrists, and taste your blood
smell your sex, and make you flood
hang myself, and cut the rope
thats tied around your throat
remembering all that killed me before
i have so little, i need nothing more
we will never be one, we will never be true
but i would die, if your warm died too......
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2004-04-06 11:17:10]
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Re: your warm
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:39:21 PM AEST
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| this was really good it had a lot of strong emotion and imagery. keep it up. -david |
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Re: your warm
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by Kirby on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:02:41 PM AEST
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| Some poems just put me back into a place where i used to love to be! and I love how you did this poem! it is really great! Keep em up! love:::Kirby |
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