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Eve of the Bloodmoon
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:17:21 AM in AEST
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Clouds accumulate and deprive me of skyward sight
Obstructing nearly all of the crimson moonlight
Life blood flows endlessly through Luna's unearthly veins
A prison of red engulfs and drives me insane
Perception distorted, firelights burning my eyes
I reach and want to shatter the stained ruby skies
I'm slowly overtaken by the scarlet veil
Consumed in the continual fireball hail
I can feel it as it burns and sets ablaze my spirit
My pupils dilate garnet beam pulls me near it
Spirit is near it
I see it and hear it
I feel it coursing through my veins
Strength i've never felt, many aeons of bloodlust
I feel like the wolf crying to the moon of rust
Like the crush of bats that drain their victims dead
Devour, empowered, surrounded by the red
Walking hypnotized I see and I believe
I've been moonstruck on this unhallowed eve
Mesmerized and endowed with a certain kind of numb
While I remain encaged in the crimson sanitarium
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Re: Eve of the Bloodmoon
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:24:31 AM AEST
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spellbinding as always......running out of different things to say to you...lol....
Very well done,
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Re: Eve of the Bloodmoon
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:28:04 AM AEST
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| Wow....hypnotizing from beginning to end, I loved it. |
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Re: Eve of the Bloodmoon
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:55:59 AM AEST
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Very vivid desription! I really like the way you write your poems! Awesome write!
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Re: Eve of the Bloodmoon
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:29:14 AM AEST
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Some of the imagery here is really cool, but I have to say that I can see from this how much your writing has matured since you wrote it. That is a compliment.
Stitch |
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Re: Eve of the Bloodmoon
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:25:33 AM AEST
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this is absolutely amazing buddy. im glad you took my advice and posted :) wonderful wonderful
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Re: Eve of the Bloodmoon
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by forever_lonely on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:47:36 AM AEST
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Wow. so vivid dan, i was enwrapped within this from first letter to last, your talent seems never ending, any luck with your search for being published? show them this and they will be enwrapped as i was.. perfect
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