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Guardian Angel
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:54:17 AM in AEST
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This fallen angels lost it's wings,
And now cannot fly,
The loving passion this angel brings,
Curled up today to die,
Her stone tears don’t wash away,
There beside you for life,
There’s nothing you can do or say,
To take you from her strife.
This angel was your saviour,
Now where are you to turn?
Is your life now to deter?
Or your soul to crumble and burn?
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Re: Guardian Angel
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:53:39 AM AEST
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Stunningly beautiful yet it very sad.well written
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Re: Guardian Angel
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by Dizza_13 on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:50:16 AM AEST
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Hey loz, dylan. Yet agian a great poem really opens ur eyes. It's nice ur sharing ur gift wif da world.
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Re: Guardian Angel
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:54:26 AM AEST
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i was walkin down the street
with some evil in my eye
some thoughts in ma head dat were makin me feel high
well me head was some boggie
and ma ears were some bass
i was walkin by my dog
when i saw this sexy face
come towards me
if she was a phone
id pick her up and dial
the fire brigade
or zero zero zero
but she stopped me in ma tracks
and i said um eh "chello chello"
woooooooo brilliant loz!!!!!!!
Also rowan is a pretty cool guy u hear wat im sayin! |
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Re: Guardian Angel
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by JoAnne_Buchanan on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:21:13 AM AEST
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Thanks for this beautiful write..
love
joanne buchanan |
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Re: Guardian Angel
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:19:29 AM AEST
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| i love this, i love the way you use the angel as a symbol of how you are...very clever. i think the line that stands out most to me is "Her stone tears don’t wash away" i love this, so much pain and sadness, but such a lovely write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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