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Low
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:51:30 AM in AEST
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There’s a pain that only I can feel,
That haunts me through the day,
A torture that becomes so real,
I just want to run away,
Death seems the only end,
And for this pain I’ve cried,
You can’t even turn to a friend,
You can only run and hide,
But when you hide it finds you,
You can’t hide from despair,
But you can drop hints and clues,
For loved ones to know your there,
It’s the burning flame inside you,
But deep within you know,
You’re the only one to blame,
For taking you so low.
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Re: Low
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by JadedExistence on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:55:27 AM AEST
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This is a great write. I can relate to it so much, having been there myself many times. I hope that someday you will be able to turn to friends and loved ones, I know how hard it is to deal with on your own. Welcome to YPDC.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: Low
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:55:47 AM AEST
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| well done. venkat |
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Re: Low
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by Dizza_13 on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:45:18 AM AEST
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Hey loz, dylan. Great write glad u decided to start postin ur poems....
Dizza |
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Re: Low
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:47:34 AM AEST
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oooow, i know a lively fellow
who is really quite unique
he's small and hes brown and yellow
ROWAN HAS A CRAZY FACE!!!
AH WOOOOOOH
HIS FACE IS SOOOOOO CRAZY
U BETTER BELIEVE IT!
BOO BOO BOO YEAH
good work loz, i shall promote u!!!! |
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Re: Low
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:07:20 AM AEST
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| Great write. |
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Re: Low
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:33:30 AM AEST
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| hey, welcome to YPDC! this is a great poem, i can definatly relate. hope you feel better soon, *hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Low
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:11:24 PM AEST
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this is deep.. and so true.. i can totally relate to this.. good poem..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Low
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:24:15 AM AEST
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| Pain is in your life. your living it. I love god I can tell you all about him.. sometimes I dont want to speak of him. but my friend. he helped me when I was younger and he changed my daddy. got a new daddy .. never hurt me again. if he can do this for me. he can do it for you. anyways.. im here good write.sandy |
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