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A study
Contributed by
twinkletoes
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Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:11:45 AM in AEST
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At night-the black sky hides wonders
in every covert quadrant
and the gazer can detect
the star's steady wanderings,
and the meteorites flee
from their restraining grasp.
With explosions of colour,
and a firey last gasp....
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2004-04-06 01:11:45]
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Re: A study
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:33:50 AM AEST
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| Good study..venkat |
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Re: A study
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:07:43 AM AEST
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that must be amazing seeing that in the desert, i used to know this old boy who served in africa during the war, he told me the night sky over the desert is amazing no light pollution at all, just millions of stars everywhere. good read.
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Re: A study
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:28:13 AM AEST
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| Whoa that's one heck of a sight....I'd love to witness something like that. Wonderful poem! |
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Re: A study
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:22:28 AM AEST
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Ah as an Astronomer I can say that I loved this poem!! I really enjoyed reading this! Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: A study
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:21:10 PM AEST
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t, this is great. I especially love the last two lines, "With explosions of colour,
and a firey last gasp....". It is a great visual and I have seen it in the night sky. Living far out in the country does have its advantages. Peace, quiet, unobstructed views and magnificent night skies.
Rita
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Re: A study
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:54:33 PM AEST
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Wow such a vivid write!Thanks for taking us there,
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Re: A study
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:39:13 PM AEST
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absolutely magical and enchantingly beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A study
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:58:27 PM AEST
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Your descriptions draw me right into the poem. I feel I am standing right there, watching the black sky.... Wonderful work to share with us. Thank-you!
Laurie |
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