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Shooting Stars
Contributed by
Parrotwing
on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:54:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Shooting stars
promising light
then dying leaving intense endless blackness
There is no sun
it was only a dream
I am awake now
encased in black ice
wishing I had never slept
Copyright ©
Parrotwing
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2004-04-06 00:54:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Shooting Stars
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:00:17 PM AEST (User
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Hmmmm . . . I rather like this. It's short, seems simple enough, yet if you read it a second time, it really makes you think . . . especially the bit :
I am awake now
encased in black ice
wishing I had never slept
Yes, I like this. Nicely done indeed.
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