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Undying Love

Contributed by carebear on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:40:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

4/5/2004
11:37PM
You showed me what love was like,
Gave me your hand to hold at night,
Each and every day you gave me light,
Whispered things that brought a smile,
We hugged close to stay strong,
We even have our own favorite song,
You've giving me faith when I've been weak,
Seen me when I've been a mess,
Protected me from the ugliness.
Taking me under your wing,
Dried my tears of hurting past,
Loved me from one moment to the last,
Memories that won't ever fade,
Feelings I know I can't express,
I'm never gonna leave you on the floor,
Not going to let you fall again.
I'll be the bestest friend,
Share the laughter we used to have.
No lies we have to hide,
You're the one I need in my life,
My heart begins to flutter from your touch,
When you kiss me I feel I'm free,
Nobody can ever make me feel the way you do it's so real,
Nothing I've ever known before
Escaping in to your dreams at night how I long to hold you,
Morning sun will rise again next to me there you will be.
Placing my hand on your heart feeling beats,
That come from you I know they are true,
Your eyes sparkle in the dark,
Hearing your voice it begins to soothe,
Moonlight pools around your face,
Giving you an angelic glow,
I can't erase your spirit from my head,
I can't deny what I know is real.
Scars that cover my left arm,
Somehow to me you make them go away,
Connected together from the start,
You stole my heart to keep it safe,
Touching with your fingertips I close my eyes with bliss,
Imagining everything we'd do I just ache to be with you.
A flower bloomed in your honor,
God gifted us for a reason,
Even as the changing season.
I wanted you to know I love you now forever more.

© Care Strom "04"

Copyright Â© carebear ... [ 2004-04-06 00:40:54]
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Re: Undying Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:24:08 PM AEST
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what a sweet love poem, i think i read it already, but i'll comment here anyways. great write, keep it up!

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