|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Rope
Contributed by
Shadow
on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:38:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Passion has left me
Alone to die
The simple knot
I begin to tie
Was it for nothing
That I took breath
I long for peace
Found only in death
The last loupe done
I begin to cry
I tried so hard
Only to die
At the ceiling
I begin to tie
No one can say
I didn’t try
The limp rope hangs
Around my Head
I take a last look
At my gentle bed
Will you miss me
After I’m dead
I wish I could
Kiss your head
The limp rope jumps
Strait as a line
These final words
At least where mine
Copyright ©
Shadow
... [
2004-04-05 23:38:16]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Rope
(User Rating: 1 )
by niki on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:37:11 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I really heard your words they touched me
i think it is a great write i have read a few of your writings and i think i will read more.
niki |
|
|
Re: The Rope
(User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:06:49 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This would be kind of tough to put in a category, it is dark but it could also be put into suicide. Really good write, I found it kind of sad as well.
~JadedExistence~ |
|
|
Re: The Rope
(User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:31:41 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
There are different descriptions of dark but I think this one is the most true since it depicts the darkness in the heart. Very well written! bitter one, hey I hope you're still there reading this comment! Lol! Keep hanging to the rope but with your hands not neck! Awesome write!
Anne :D |
|
|
Re: The Rope
(User Rating: 1 )
by Alli on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 11:44:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very beautifully written, touching, emotional. I love this poem for so many reasons. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
