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The Tears Magnify the Image
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:05:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your face was brushed with sadness
I can see it in your eyes
The tears only magnify the image
For sadness can not hide
I asked you why your crying
But you kept it deep inside
I wish that you would tell me
But instead you tell me lies
The scarring of your misery paints a mortal wound
The pain you shed is evidence, perhaps of your dark gloom
You keep falling into darkness
Its like your destiny
Instead I want to help you
Help you to be free
Allow my hand to be your anchor
Please listen to my words
The tears only magnify the sadness when its feeding from your soul
Stand strong or it will get you
Id hate to see you fall
But that time is coming, and I will hold you through it all
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-04-05 23:05:57]
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Re: The Tears Magnify the Image
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:06:20 AM AEST
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And that is exactly what true friends are for. Help them when they are down. Never go away, just be there to listen and give a hug. This is a lovely piece of work.
Rita |
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Re: The Tears Magnify the Image
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:35:01 AM AEST
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| you have great friendly heart..so tolerant to the lies..forgiveness is always good..A very good write. venkat |
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Re: The Tears Magnify the Image
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:52:20 AM AEST
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| A poem of strength for a good friend. Excellent from bernard. |
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Re: The Tears Magnify the Image
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 06:43:19 AM AEST
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The most important implication of true friendship or love.
Deeply touching. Wonderful.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: The Tears Magnify the Image
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 09:33:33 AM AEST
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What a great poem! Wow I really can relate to this one as you have seen from my last poem. Really inspirational one, made my eyes cloudy again! Awesome write! Keep it up you're really talented!
Anne :D |
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Re: The Tears Magnify the Image
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by arden on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:26:32 AM AEST
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Excellent!
wonderfully done. just amazing.
great job. keep it up you got alot of talent.
Arden |
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Re: The Tears Magnify the Image
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:53:55 PM AEST
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WHAT A GREAT FRIEND YOU MUST BE! IT'S THE GREATEST THING IN THE WORLD!! NOW YOU'RE MAKING IT COME TRUE FOR A FRIEND OF YOUR OWN!!! GREAT POEM & A WONDERFUL PERSON!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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Re: The Tears Magnify the Image
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by spider on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:05:48 PM AEST
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hope you have friends that care about you that much,
beautiful poem,
i know sometimes it can seem like your friend doesn't want to let you help but they do appreciate you being there, at least with you they're not completley lost, give it time and they'll let you help |
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Re: The Tears Magnify the Image
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:23:14 AM AEST
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ohhh very sweet jenny, being there for a friend is all we can do, this is so touching:) hugs n' love nessa
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