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Christ
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:39:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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The way He was treated,
was very inhumane,
He was arrested for
crimes He didn't commit
in the darkest of night.
He was whipped
to a bloody pulp,
as the flesh was being
ripped from His body.
He was put on parade,
while being tortured through town,
He was spat upon,
being stoned with rocks,
He was betrayed,
He was denied.
His life was being
stolen from Him,
as His mother's eyes
began to swell with tears.
He was hung upon
the cross that He
beared upon His back,
it held His final end.
He was displayed
like a trophy,
on the hill that
was His final resting place.
He was one very
brave man in my eyes,
to go through all He
went through to be
crucified for our sins.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.31/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-04-05 21:39:19]
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Re: Christ
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by Rylo on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:51:40 PM AEST
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| This was very intense, you know the thought of people doing things like that to one man is really sick. But Jesus knew that it was up to him for all of us to be saved today. Very good write, and awesome read. |
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Re: Christ
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:55:08 PM AEST
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I cannot bring myself to see that movie. I am so anti-violence anyway. It was bad enough to read it. I simply cannot make myself visualize that he had to go through that torture for us. Cynthia, this is one of your best yet.
hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Christ
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:03:35 PM AEST
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| This poem is good, and very thoughtful. I know you mean well by doing this, so I am going to give you a great job. You are sincere in this writting, and I am glad you shared it. however, the movie that inspired this poem is the exact exaple of one of the major things Christ was against, all of the millions of dollars that was made from this movie was not for God's work, nor was it to bring people closer to Jesus. someone is rolling around in a new BMW from the money that was made off this film. They have capitalized, wrapped up in plastic, and sold Jesus' suffering for a profit. In my oppinion, this film(The Passion of Christ) is one of the most hypocritical ideas a Christian could support. It is against everything Jesus taught, and I am sickened to see all the Christian support of this film. This goes to show the true believers that the church truly is lost from the message. I truly hope you do not take this as a personal attack, for that is not my motive in commenting on your poem today. again, good write, keep up the good work! |
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Re: Christ
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:05:23 PM AEST
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I've Not Watched The Passion Of Christ Yet..Havn't Had The Strength To Do Much From The Cancer
But I Do Know Jesus Our Lord And Savior Suffered Alot Of Pain And Agnoy For Our Sins.
Thank's For Writing This It Helps Me To Remember Just How Great Our Lord And Savior Is....What He Went Through To Save A Wretch Like Me....
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Christ
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by Kie on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 10:25:02 PM AEST
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| You expressed your feelings and emotions strongly in this poem and it touched my heart. I also saw the movie and I think it is hard to not be moved by seeing something so clearly depicted. I enjoyed your poem... Kie |
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Re: Christ
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by blueheart on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:00:50 PM AEST
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| I havent watched the movie but I've heard its an intense description of what the Lord went through. Very good poem, it evokes sadness in my heart. |
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