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Confusing Touch
Contributed by
waos
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Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:52:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm so confused inside.
I can't decide what to think.
You've been there all along,
but I've never seen you in this light.
I thought you liked her,
I never envisioned me.
And now I'm lonely stumbling,
trying to see what you see.
I wish I knew your mind,
but I'm stuck here in mine.
I wish I knew your thoughts,
but I'm lost here this time.
Such innocent beginnings,
occurring between us now.
What about innocent endings,
or a sincere vow?
Your touch so gentle,
focusing me on the point of connection.
The soft stroking so comforting,
evoking a fear of rejection.
Such a peaceful relaxation
filling me inside.
It's so foreign to me
but I can't hide.
I wish I knew your mind,
but I'm stuck here in mine.
I wish I knew your thoughts,
but I'm lost here this time.
I wish I knew
what would come of this.
Is there only things to gain,
or is there so much for me to miss?
I wish I knew your mind,
but I'm stuck here in mine.
I wish I knew your thoughts,
but I'm lost here this time.
Copyright ©
waos
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2004-04-05 20:52:16]
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Re: Confusing Touch
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by booboo on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:02:20 PM AEST
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WOW VERY NICE,KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
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Re: Confusing Touch
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:06:33 PM AEST
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Loved this.... How I wish I knew the thoughts of a certain someone also.... Good write..
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Re: Confusing Touch
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by jmt25607 on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 09:28:52 PM AEST
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thats lovely .. i wish i could write like that i mean its a heart touching poem and i hope this guy gives you the time of day you desire if not i hope and bet you can find better but till then i hope you get him
jessika
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Re: Confusing Touch
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:54:24 PM AEST
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Very good write. It shows the confussion in ones mind. It also shows even tho there's fear of rejection it shows a strong attraction.
luv, huggs, facing fear,
emy |
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